Promises promises

[Dutch]

Head’s in the cloud
Eyes cast down
Pebbles, so endlessly sown
I'm in love again
With a dream
Too real or so it seems
can you blame me for trying
To explain this other plane
Of existence
In simple words
That hurt the verbs
Just by spelling your name
I take the blame
And hope for you
Hopefully you'll get better
Learning words to revert
The alphabet or
Speak in the silence
That drops when words stop
And drift away
Casually colliding against the inner frame
Of a perfect mindset
To attack
The silence

What's your offer incorporeal
For once a decent proposal
Like a kaleidoscope colliding
Circles, squares
Triangles, try all angles to see
This new scenery unifying
Into one,whole
Unfolding

Promises promises
That's what wrong with us
Murder me pretty
Pretty miss anonymous

[nicklz]

Nice little verse. Lots of great images. I loved the ending.

I can understand the title, but I'm old and immediately started singing Dionne Warwick's Burt Bacharach/Hal David arrangement of Promises, Promises. lol Thanks a lot.