Idle Time

[nicklz]

"Idle Time"

Idle time
Painting pictures in my head
Every brush stroke off white
No saturation or depth
So not me anymore

The blue sky is bluer now
Maybe that's the key
Color on the outside from the inside
Making changes in routine
Maybe that's the muse inside of me
Breaking free

BJH
5/9/2009

Does this have enough to it or should I develop something more in the middle. It just doesn't seem quite right to me and I can't figure it out. Thanks!